S2 WEEK 3: Theresa May & Boris Johnson Editorial


Theresa May reaches out to rival Boris Johnson 
'We can do this together' 
Developed Editorial:


Initial Editorial:

My initial attempt at this editorial did not quite communicate the intended message. Boris does not look that reluctant to help May. I think his face shows concern, but his body language does not match. The developed piece is stronger, but I think May could be shown to have a tighter grip on Boris. Her hand could have a tighter grasp on his shoulder. Boris could be presented trying to pull away from her grasp. One of the most important factors of this editorial for me, is that my audience recognise the figures. From feedback from peers, I can see that they are identifiable.

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