S2 WEEK 2: Putin Editorial Development
'The task of the government is not only to pour honey into a cup, but sometimes to give bitter medicine'.
After receiving feedback on my initial response to the Putin quote, I developed my editorial piece further. I aimed to emphasise the idea of someone being forced to swallow the honey. In this piece Putin resembles a dentist. I decided not to use a detailed figure when drawing the victim, in order to show the person could be any member of the general public. In order to develop this further, I would make Putin appear to be more forceful. Another improvement for this piece would be to work on Putin’s facial features, as he looks quite young. I would include lines on the forehead to represent wrinkles and his current age.

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